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    1. This type of activity introduces the idea tostudents that language varies by con

      Exactly, it’s not about what’s “right” or “wrong.” It’s about understanding when to be casual and when to be formal. That’s a skill, not a rule.

    2. To begin the Flip the Switch lesson, teachersask students to identify settings in which they com-municat

      This lesson is smart, it helps students realize they already switch how they talk depending on the situation. She’s just giving that a name.

    3. t. The authors suggest that teach-ing students to navigate between home and schooldiscourses, a task they call code-switching, privi-leges both language

      This is her main point: students can use both styles, but they need to understand which one fits where. That’s what real communication skills are about.

    4. Because digital language represents such a largepart of the primary discourse of today's adolescents(Prensky), it is not surprising that the style of elec-tronic communication is "seeping into their school-work

      She’s explaining why texting shows up in schoolwork, it’s what students do all day. It’s not bad writing, just habit, and that’s an important difference.

    5. ."However, I quickly realized that most texters,and especially those who were sitting in my class-room as students, did not view text speak as ademon sent to destroy Standard En

      She realizes her students don’t see texting as wrong. It’s just how people communicate now, which changes how teachers have to approach writing.

    1. he regularization term is sometimes called the penalty term

      Regularization is a technique that penalizes covariates when we have a lot of features. It either shrinks covariates or zeros out covariates completely. For smoother function we want a larger penalty term to shrink coefficients/

    1. Web2.0 ideology is the child of both Silicon Valley entrepreneurialcapitalism and activist subcultures like independent publishing, anti-globalization activism, Burning Man, cyberdelic rave culture, andFOSS.

      I think this line really captures why Silicon Valley is so confusing. There's this mix of idealism and business that doesn't quite fit together. As someone who's grown up here and become more interested in business, I've seen this firsthand. People talk about changing the world and making things better for everyone, but at the same tmie they're constantly chasing investors and profits. They want to seem different from traditional corporations, but in the end, they still just want money. It's visible everywhere today. AI companies claim to be ethical while competing to dominate the market. Startups talk about helping people but really just want funding and profit. Marwick's point about Web 2.0 being born out of activism and capitalism explains that contradiction so well. It's what makes Silicon Valley interesting but also kind of fake. It's built on a constant clash between wanting to do good and wanting to make money.

    2. . The new web is a very differentthing. It’s a tool for bringing together the small contributions ofmillions of people and making them matter.

      I found it interesting how this line really captures the optimism that surrounded social media in its early days. Everyone genuinely believed it could change the world, especially the way that we communicate. It's wild to think about how sincere that excitement was compared to now. Even though platforms like TikTok and Instagram still connect to millions of people and let them share their lives, the focus has shifted. What used to feel like a happy place for community has turned into something more performative and sometimes even toxic. People's attitudes toward social media have gone from excitement about connection to serious concerns about mental health, misinformation, and negativity. It's often seen now as one of the biggest causes of anxiety, depression, and even suicide, especially among teens. I think the way that Marwick includes this quote really sets the tone for her critique. It reminds readers of what social media was supposed to be before showing what it's actually become.

    1. Ku ktorým morálnym sústavám vedie sme opísali vyššie.

      Které části textu výše vysvětlují, ke kterým morálním soustavám vede kapitalismus? Měl autor na mysli tuto pasáž?

      Kapitalizmus stavia samého seba do kontrastu s agresívnymi totalitami, aby skryl vlastnú plíživú totalitárnosť a mohol sa tváriť ako nie dokonalý, no najlepší možný systém. V kombinácii s demokratickými ideálmi sa odieva do plášťa garanta dodržiavania univerzálnych ľudských práv, ktoré sú pre neho však iba nadstavbou. Je kompatibilný s akoukoľvek sústavou morálnych hodnôt a preto sa nevylučuje ani s fašizmom. Práve naopak. Mechanizmy, ktoré zavádza, rozsievajú semienka fašistických tendencií. Tie klíčia na ním zoranej pôde a napokon vyrastú do podoby, v ktorej sa začnú kriticky veľkej časti spoločnosti javiť ako prijateľná alternatíva k nedôstojným pomerom, do ktorých ju paradoxne uvrhla sama kapitalistická mašinéria.

    2. posledné, čo im dáva zmysel, je odovzdanie moci diktátorom a korporátnym mafiám

      Lidé odevzdávají moc diktátorům a korporátním mafiím, když volí zkorumpované politiky.

    1. First, the script counts the number of adults and children in each household to retain household composition information. Next, it re-labels the number of vehicles to maintain consistency. The key transformation then assigns each adult as their own household by modifying the SERIALNO and SPORDER identifiers, effectively creating a new household for each adult while dropping children from the dataset. This ensures that person-level targets are accurately represented, with each adult treated as a separate entity for weighting purposes. Finally, the script verifies that the total weights remain consistent after this restructuring, ensuring that the overall population estimates are preserved.

      Consider reformatting this into a bulleted list

    2. households so that estimates align with the population

      I suggest rephrasing, something like: "data so that estimates align with the targets (i.e.,population)."

    1. Second, I pointed at the productive nature of small disagreements.

      I love showing the students how this works with the students when they have different answers to problems or differences in opinions. We discuss the different ideas and dissect or unpack the ideas together and see if one answer has a better reason than the other. This helps the students understand how everyone thinks differently and comes to their own conclusions differently. Some of the responses from the students are mind blowing and fantastic rationals due to personal experiences.

    1. Eğitim Rehberi Hukuk Teknolojisi 101Avukatlar İçin Temel Rehber Yapay zeka destekli hukuk teknolojilerinin avukatlara nasıl %85'e varan verimlilik kazancı sağladığını, hangi alanlarda kullanıldığını ve geleceğin hukuk pratiğini nasıl şekillendirdiğini keşfedin. Türk hukuk sektörüne özel kapsamlı başlangıç rehberi.

      bu başlıkta sorun var

    1. The Golden Apple of Discord by Jacob Jordaens

      None of the images have citations, we don't know where these pictures came from (for example, a museum colection). Also, are these images folowing the Wikipedia's copyright guidlines?

    2. In later ages playwrights, historians, and other intellectuals would create works inspired by the Trojan War. The three great tragedians of Athens: Aeschylus, Sophocles and Euripides, wrote a number of dramas that portray episodes from the Trojan War. Among Roman writers the most important is the first century BC poet Virgil; in Book 2 of his Aeneid, Aeneas narrates the sack of Troy.

      There is no citation in this section. If you are planning on editing the article, maybe it would be a good idea to find sources to support these claims.

    3. The Trojan War was a legendary conflict in Greek mythology that took place around the twelfth or thirteenth century BC. The war was waged by the Achaeans (Greeks) against the city of Troy after Paris of Troy took Helen from her husband Menelaus, king of Sparta. The war is one of the most important events in Greek mythology, and it has been narrated through many works of Greek literature, most notably Homer's Iliad. The core of the Iliad (Books II – XXIII) describes a period of four days and two nights in the tenth year of the decade-long siege of Troy; the Odyssey describes the journey home of Odysseus, one of the war's heroes. Other parts of the war are described in a cycle of epic poems, which have survived through fragments. Episodes from the war provided material for Greek tragedy and other works of Greek literature, and for Roman poets including Virgil and Ovid. The ancient Greeks believed that Troy was located near the Dardanelles and that the Trojan War was a historical event of the twelfth or thirteenth century BC. By the mid-nineteenth century AD, both the war and the city were widely seen as non-historical, but in 1868, the German archaeologist Heinrich Schliemann met Frank Calvert, who convinced Schliemann that Troy was at what is now Hisarlık in modern-day Turkey.[1] On the basis of excavations conducted by Schliemann and others, this claim is now accepted by most scholars.[2][3]

      Just like we talk in class, there are many claims with no citation in this section.

    1. Gray

      This may be splitting hairs. Outside the study region is listed as "gray" here but in the figure & legend, it appears more purple. Maybe because it's the rainbow colors which make me assume the last color is purple (or violet), and also because there are other regions in the map that are gray, albeit a lighter shade of gray

    2. (a)

      Can this be displayed within the paragraph and not in this separate text box? It's odd to have to scroll horizontally to finish reading this paragraph

    1. Toutefois, Enquire ne permet de mettre en relation des documents par liens bidirectionnels qu’entre des documents appartenant à un même espace de gestion de fichiers, et souvent en pratique sur le même ordinateur.

      Puisque l'idée du web était de pouvoir accéder à des fichiers présents sur d'autres ordinateurs à travers des adresse uniques et en utilisant l'infrastructure d'internet pour y accéder.

    1. Child pornography and non-consensual distribution of intimate images.

      This is a concept we need to explain more clearly to everyone—especially minors. Many don’t realize that even if you're underage yourself, sharing or possessing certain types of photos involving others can still be illegal and harmful. It’s not just about personal choices; it’s about understanding consent, privacy, and the law.

    2. Think carefully before you post. Anything you share online can stay there a long time, even after you delete it.

      This is a concept I wish had been taught earlier. A lot of people post things when they’re young that can reflect poorly on them later. I didn’t learn about this until my senior year, when we were taught that colleges and employers might look at your social media to get a sense of who you are. It really made me think about how important it is to be intentional with what we share online.

    3. It’s good practice to ask permission before sharing a picture of someone else. In a Kaspersky Lab survey, 58% of people reported feeling upset or uncomfortable when a photo of them was shared that they didn’t want made public.

      I agree this is an important practice to teach our students. Photos and videos taken at school are a big part of their daily lives, but they don’t always consider who might be in the background or whether that person would want to be publicly shared. Helping students think critically about consent and privacy is essential.

    1. code-meshing in-volves the intentional incorporation of more thanone language within writing to “exploit and blendthose differences” (Young et al., 2014, p. 43) in a waythat frees students to exercise identity and agencywithin their language use.

      Definition.

    2. Researchers in bilingual education and bilitera-cy have understood code-switching as the oral useof two or more languages either within or acrosssentences (intrasententially or intersententially)

      Definition.

    3. as evidenced bythe National Public Radio CodeSwitch project (https://www.npr.org/sections/codeswitch/2013/04/05/176351804/about-us)

      Look into this project and at a small summary about what it is here...

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    1. Asian Visual Culture. La cultura visual ha sido producida y moldeada por las comunidades asiáticas a lo largo de la historia. La investigación reunida en esta colección discute la creación, representación y exhibición de formas de arte asiático, tanto dentro de culturas específicas como en el extranjero. Los artículos plantean una variedad de preguntas para los investigadores: ¿Cómo los eventos sociales y culturales han moldeado los estilos artísticos? ¿Cómo se adapta el cine asiático para el público transcultural? ¿Y pueden las exposiciones internacionales de arte actuar como una forma de diplomacia cultural? Explore los artículos de nuestras principales revistas de cultura visual, navegando por un amplio espectro de formas artísticas en y desde Asia, incluso en pantalla, en pinturas, colecciones de museos y diseño estético.

      super interesante un acercamiento a la cultura asiatica vía las humanidades digitales

    1. of culture is acquired unconsciously by happenstance—that is, nobody planned to teach it, and no one made an effort to consciously try to learn it.

      This has always been a question of him, how have we developed different cultures, and how does everyone not follow the same one?

    2. Because it requires deliberate effort and people are not constantly doing it, winking can acquire special meaning in social interactions.

      It is interesting how they are telling us how winking requires more effort; which is completely true because it does need more effort and sometimes people cannot do it.

    3. Archaeologists use material artifacts as keys to understanding the technologies, social practices, and ideas of ancient peoples.

      This field of anthropology is the most interesting to me because I find it interesting how we can learn how ancient people have lived.

    4. Some live in tents made of wooden beams and covered with animal skins or cloth, in caves hollowed out of sandstone or volcanic rock, or in wooden structures built on stilts or in trees to avoid floods and predators.

      Since most of Americans have house holds that are held together buy animals skins and sandstone. Its kind of interesting how some are still not as advanced as us.

    5. The room for cooking (the kitchen) used to be separated from the room where people socialized (the living room or great room), as it was assumed that one person (the wife) would cook in the kitchen while another person (the husband) relaxed alone or with company in the living room.

      It still amazes me that this was the original standard. So much has changed over time.

    1. What should be discarded is the idea, prevalent in the mainstream media worldwide and even at the UN, that charging for the social cost of carbon and its “offsetting” can replace public planning for socio-technological transition.

      I think the argument being made here, is that just having a price by itself it's a gross oversimplification about what is needed.

      And just because a price has been useful in places where you have seen a transition away from fossil fuel use, it doesn't mean you should start with a price.

      The price is the thing that comes in once you have a clear alternative to the fossil-powered default, to make it less attractive.

    2. the scale required for carbon market offset projects—through environmental conservation, forest regeneration, or reforestation—to ensure net-zero emissions is absolutely unfeasible. Offsetting cannot function as an alternative to decarbonizing energy, production, and infrastructure systems simply because there is not enough land to replant forests.

      I think this is quite helpful as the simplistic version of the argument about why a carbon market by itself is not good enough. You can also make a similar argument for technical carbon removal. it's just too expensive to rely on.

    3. The strategy for transitioning to renewable energy should not, therefore, begin with raising carbon prices and waiting for the market to offer an alternative solution in the short term. Instead, it must involve government planning for the supply of new green technologies and substitute infrastructure based on sustainable energy. Only after these technologies and infrastructure are accessible can raising carbon prices induce rapid substitution. Until then, consumers and user companies will be hostage to dirty options

      I think the argument here is that, you need to build the alternative before you can choke off the fossil incumbent.

      A precondition of being able to raise prices is having something people can migrate TO, that meets their needs. Otherwise, people reject the premise of a lot of the time,

    4. In practice, energy’s inelastic demand means that even if prices rise, users of dirty technologies and fossil fuels will continue to pay, even if they become poorer, because they cannot find feasible substitutes

      This seem to be arguing that carbon pricing is really ineffective in the face of inelastic demand. You can point the gillet jaune in France and their protests about the price of diesel was a good example of this. The demand inelasticity thing though is extremely important to get your head around, because while there are definitely clear examples that we have seen there are also many four cases where it's much less clear cut and things may indeed be more elastic than we thought.

    5. The global carbon market approved in Baku will not overcome this problem. International competition to reduce costs to attract private investment is a systemic feature of the world economy. It creates a coordination problem, making it impossible to establish a single international price for carbon. International divergence in carbon prices undermines an effective system for reducing global emissions

      So a key thing about the global covered market discussion at cop, is that there is no single Price. So just like our countries compete to have low tax resumes you have the same thing for carbon here. Oh dear.

    6. Uruguay’s carbon tax came closest to the IPCC figure, pricing the emission of one metric ton of greenhouse gases at $167.17. At the other end of the spectrum, however, Indonesia’s carbon market charged only $0.61 for the same ton.

      Wow, Uruguay actually has a high carbon tax?

    1. Marisa Senngam;  Suphannika Pornwattanakavee;  Nattawut Leelakanok;  Teerarat Todsarot;  Gabrielle Angele Tatta Guinto;  Ratchanon Takun;  Assadawut Sumativit

      The correct order is: Suphannika Pornwattanakavee; Nattawut Leelakanok; Teerarat Todsarot; Gabrielle Angele Tatta Guinto; Ratchanon Takun; Assadawut Sumativit; Marisa Senngam. This will be changed in the next revision and the final manuscript.

    2. Marisa Senngam;  Suphannika Pornwattanakavee;  Nattawut Leelakanok;  Teerarat Todsarot;  Gabrielle Angele Tatta Guinto;  Ratchanon Takun;  Assadawut Sumativit

      The correct order is: Suphannika Pornwattanakavee; Nattawut Leelakanok; Teerarat Todsarot; Gabrielle Angele Tatta Guinto; Ratchanon Takun; Assadawut Sumativit; Marisa Senngam. This will be changed in the next revision and the final manuscript.

    1. but how a race of men came into the world so exalted above the rest, and distinguished like some new species, is worth inquiring into, and whether they are the means of happiness or of misery to mankind.

      Paine wanted everyone equal. His idea of America withough Britain's control over them was something a lot of people may not have been ready for.

    2. In the following sheets, the author hath studiously avoided every thing which is personal among ourselves.

      Paine addressed "Common Sense" to ordinary colonists his emotional style helped turn revolutionary ideas into later starting the Declaration of Independence.

    3. MANKIND being originally equals in the order of creation, the equality could only be destroyed by some subsequent circumstance: the distinctions of rich and poor may in a great measure be accounted for, and that without having recourse to the harsh ill-sounding names of oppression and avarice.

      How does his definition of equality differ from in the Declaration of Independence? Paine's hope was for women and men of all races and ethnicities to be equal. This was not the case.

    4. Paine’s pamphlet offered a very different portrayal of the British government. His criticisms swept across the North American continent and generated widespread support for American independence.

      Paine wrote the pamphlet called, "Common Sense" to persuade other Americans to break away from Britain.

    5. It was the most prosperous invention the Devil ever set on foot for the promotion of idolatry.

      Thomas Paine used religious language to intrigue the colonists. In 1776, religious authority was very respected in the political world. Him saying the monarchy was from the Devil was a smart move for him since he was for independence and everyone valued religion at the time.

    1. The deciding factor in their choice has been that all were written by Fisher.

      why did Blake emphasize that not all articles are about standard English?

    1. eLife Assessment

      This study provides useful insights into the ways in which germinal center B cell metabolism, particularly lipid metabolism, affects cellular responses. The authors use sophisticated mouse models to demonstrate that ether lipids are relevant for B cell homeostasis and efficient humoral responses. Although the data were collected from in vitro and in vivo experiments and analyzed using solid and validated methodology, more careful experiments and extensive revision of the manuscript will be required to strengthen the authors' conclusions.

    2. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this manuscript, Hoon Cho et al. presents a novel investigation into the role of PexRAP, an intermediary in ether lipid biosynthesis, in B cell function, particularly during the Germinal Center (GC) reaction. The authors profile lipid composition in activated B cells both in vitro and in vivo, revealing the significance of PexRAP. Using a combination of animal models and imaging mass spectrometry, they demonstrate that PexRAP is specifically required in B cells. They further establish that its activity is critical upon antigen encounter, shaping B cell survival during the GC reaction.

      Mechanistically, they show that ether lipid synthesis is necessary to modulate reactive oxygen species (ROS) levels and prevent membrane peroxidation.

      Highlights of the Manuscript:

      The authors perform exhaustive imaging mass spectrometry (IMS) analyses of B cells, including GC B cells, to explore ether lipid metabolism during the humoral response. This approach is particularly noteworthy given the challenge of limited cell availability in GC reactions, which often hampers metabolomic studies. IMS proves to be a valuable tool in overcoming this limitation, allowing detailed exploration of GC metabolism.

      The data presented is highly relevant, especially in light of recent studies suggesting a pivotal role for lipid metabolism in GC B cells. While these studies primarily focus on mitochondrial function, this manuscript uniquely investigates peroxisomes, which are linked to mitochondria and contribute to fatty acid oxidation (FAO). By extending the study of lipid metabolism beyond mitochondria to include peroxisomes, the authors add a critical dimension to our understanding of B cell biology.

      Additionally, the metabolic plasticity of B cells poses challenges for studying metabolism, as genetic deletions from the beginning of B cell development often result in compensatory adaptations. To address this, the authors employ an acute loss-of-function approach using two conditional, cell-type-specific gene inactivation mouse models: one targeting B cells after the establishment of a pre-immune B cell population (Dhrs7b^f/f, huCD20-CreERT2) and the other during the GC reaction (Dhrs7b^f/f; S1pr2-CreERT2). This strategy is elegant and well-suited to studying the role of metabolism in B cell activation.

      Overall, this manuscript is a significant contribution to the field, providing robust evidence for the fundamental role of lipid metabolism during the GC reaction and unveiling a novel function for peroxisomes in B cells. However, several major points need to be addressed:

      Major Comments:

      Figures 1 and 2

      The authors conclude, based on the results from these two figures, that PexRAP promotes the homeostatic maintenance and proliferation of B cells. In this section, the authors first use a tamoxifen-inducible full Dhrs7b knockout (KO) and afterwards Dhrs7bΔ/Δ-B model to specifically characterize the role of this molecule in B cells. They characterize the B and T cell compartments using flow cytometry (FACS) and examine the establishment of the GC reaction using FACS and immunofluorescence. They conclude that B cell numbers are reduced, and the GC reaction is defective upon stimulation, showing a reduction in the total percentage of GC cells, particularly in the light zone (LZ).

      The analysis of the steady-state B cell compartment should also be improved. This includes a more detailed characterization of MZ and B1 populations, given the role of lipid metabolism and lipid peroxidation in these subtypes.

      Suggestions for Improvement:

      - B Cell compartment characterization: A deeper characterization of the B cell compartment in non-immunized mice is needed, including analysis of Marginal Zone (MZ) maturation and a more detailed examination of the B1 compartment. This is especially important given the role of specific lipid metabolism in these cell types. The phenotyping of the B cell compartment should also include an analysis of immunoglobulin levels on the membrane, considering the impact of lipids on membrane composition.

      - GC Response Analysis Upon Immunization: The GC response characterization should include additional data on the T cell compartment, specifically the presence and function of Tfh cells. In Fig. 1H, the distribution of the LZ appears strikingly different. However, the authors have not addressed this in the text. A more thorough characterization of centroblasts and centrocytes using CXCR4 and CD86 markers is needed.<br /> The gating strategy used to characterize GC cells (GL7+CD95+ in IgD− cells) is suboptimal. A more robust analysis of GC cells should be performed in total B220+CD138− cells.

      - The authors claim that Dhrs7b supports the homeostatic maintenance of quiescent B cells in vivo and promotes effective proliferation. This conclusion is primarily based on experiments where CTV-labeled PexRAP-deficient B cells were adoptively transferred into μMT mice (Fig. 2D-F). However, we recommend reviewing the flow plots of CTV in Fig. 2E, as they appear out of scale. More importantly, the low recovery of PexRAP-deficient B cells post-adoptive transfer weakens the robustness of the results and is insufficient to conclusively support the role of PexRAP in B cell proliferation in vivo.

      - In vitro stimulation experiments: These experiments need improvement. The authors have used anti-CD40 and BAFF for B cell stimulation; however, it would be beneficial to also include anti-IgM in the stimulation cocktail. In Fig. 2G, CTV plots do not show clear defects in proliferation, yet the authors quantify the percentage of cells with more than three divisions. These plots should clearly display the gating strategy. Additionally, details about histogram normalization and potential defects in cell numbers are missing. A more in-depth analysis of apoptosis is also required to determine whether the observed defects are due to impaired proliferation or reduced survival.

    3. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Cho et al. investigate the role of ether lipid biosynthesis in B cell biology, particularly focusing on GC B cell, by inducible deletion of PexRAP, an enzyme responsible for the synthesis of ether lipids.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the data are well-presented, the paper is well-written and provides valuable mechanistic insights into the importance of PexRAP enzyme in GC B cell proliferation.

      Weaknesses:

      More detailed mechanisms of the impaired GC B cell proliferation by PexRAP deficiency remain to be further investigated. In the minor part, there are issues with the interpretation of the data which might cause confusion for the readers.

    4. Author response:

      eLife Assessment

      This study provides useful insights into the ways in which germinal center B cell metabolism, particularly lipid metabolism, affects cellular responses. The authors use sophisticated mouse models to demonstrate that ether lipids are relevant for B cell homeostasis and efficient humoral responses. Although the data were collected from in vitro and in vivo experiments and analyzed using solid and validated methodology, more careful experiments and extensive revision of the manuscript will be required to strengthen the authors' conclusions.

      In addition to praise for the eLife system and transparency (public posting of the reviews; along with an opportunity to address them), we are grateful for the decision of the Editors to select this submission for in-depth peer review and to the referees for the thoughtful and constructive comments.

      In overview, we mostly agree with the specific comments and evaluation of strengths of what the work adds as well as with indications of limitations and caveats that apply to the breadth of conclusions. One can view these as a combination of weaknesses, of instances of reading more into the work than what it says, and of important future directions opened up by the findings we report. Regarding the positives, we appreciate the reviewers' appraisal that our work unveils a novel mechanism in which the peroxisomal enzyme PexRAP mediates B cell intrinsic ether lipid synthesis and promotes a humoral immune response. We are gratified by a recognition that a main contribution of the work is to show that a spatial lipidomic analysis can set the stage for discovery of new molecular processes in biology that are supported by using 2-dimensional imaging mass spectrometry techniques and cell type specific conditional knockout mouse models.

      By and large, the technical issues are items we will strive to improve. Ultimately, an over-arching issue in research publications in this epoch are the questions "when is enough enough?" and "what, or how much, advance will be broadly important in moving biological and biomedical research forward?" It appears that one limitation troubling the reviews centers on whether the mechanism of increased ROS and multi-modal death - supported most by the in vitro evidence - applies to germinal center B cells in situ, versus either a mechanism for decreased GC that mostly applies to the pre-GC clonal amplification (or recruitment into GC). Overall, we agree that this leap could benefit from additional evidence - but as resources ended we instead leave that question for the future other than the findings with S1pr2-CreERT2-driven deletion leading to less GC B cells. While we strove to be very careful in framing such a connection as an inference in the posted manuscript, we will revisit the matter via rechecking the wording when revising the text after trying to get some specific evidence.  

      In the more granular part of this provisional response (below), we will outline our plan prompted by the reviewers but also comment on a few points of disagreement or refinement (longer and more detailed explanation). The plan includes more detailed analysis of B cell compartments, surface level of immunoglobulin, Tfh cell population, a refinement of GC B cell markers, and the ex vivo GC B cell analysis for ROS, proliferation, and cell death. We will also edit the text to provide more detailed information and clarify our interpretation to prevent the confusion of our results.  At a practical level, some evidence likely is technologically impractical, and an unfortunate determinant is the lack of further sponsored funding for further work. The detailed point-by-point response to the reviewer’s comments is below.  

      Public Reviews:

      Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this manuscript, Sung Hoon Cho et al. presents a novel investigation into the role of PexRAP, an intermediary in ether lipid biosynthesis, in B cell function, particularly during the Germinal Center (GC) reaction. The authors profile lipid composition in activated B cells both in vitro and in vivo, revealing the significance of PexRAP. Using a combination of animal models and imaging mass spectrometry, they demonstrate that PexRAP is specifically required in B cells. They further establish that its activity is critical upon antigen encounter, shaping B cell survival during the GC reaction.

      Mechanistically, they show that ether lipid synthesis is necessary to modulate reactive oxygen species (ROS) levels and prevent membrane peroxidation.

      Highlights of the Manuscript:

      The authors perform exhaustive imaging mass spectrometry (IMS) analyses of B cells, including GC B cells, to explore ether lipid metabolism during the humoral response. This approach is particularly noteworthy given the challenge of limited cell availability in GC reactions, which often hampers metabolomic studies. IMS proves to be a valuable tool in overcoming this limitation, allowing detailed exploration of GC metabolism.

      The data presented is highly relevant, especially in light of recent studies suggesting a pivotal role for lipid metabolism in GC B cells. While these studies primarily focus on mitochondrial function, this manuscript uniquely investigates peroxisomes, which are linked to mitochondria and contribute to fatty acid oxidation (FAO). By extending the study of lipid metabolism beyond mitochondria to include peroxisomes, the authors add a critical dimension to our understanding of B cell biology.

      Additionally, the metabolic plasticity of B cells poses challenges for studying metabolism, as genetic deletions from the beginning of B cell development often result in compensatory adaptations. To address this, the authors employ an acute loss-of-function approach using two conditional, cell-type-specific gene inactivation mouse models: one targeting B cells after the establishment of a pre-immune B cell population (Dhrs7b^f/f, huCD20-CreERT2) and the other during the GC reaction (Dhrs7b^f/f; S1pr2-CreERT2). This strategy is elegant and well-suited to studying the role of metabolism in B cell activation.

      Overall, this manuscript is a significant contribution to the field, providing robust evidence for the fundamental role of lipid metabolism during the GC reaction and unveiling a novel function for peroxisomes in B cells.

      We appreciate these positive reactions and response, and agree with the overview and summary of the paper's approaches and strengths.

      However, several major points need to be addressed:

      Major Comments:

      Figures 1 and 2

      The authors conclude, based on the results from these two figures, that PexRAP promotes the homeostatic maintenance and proliferation of B cells. In this section, the authors first use a tamoxifen-inducible full Dhrs7b knockout (KO) and afterwards Dhrs7bΔ/Δ-B model to specifically characterize the role of this molecule in B cells. They characterize the B and T cell compartments using flow cytometry (FACS) and examine the establishment of the GC reaction using FACS and immunofluorescence. They conclude that B cell numbers are reduced, and the GC reaction is defective upon stimulation, showing a reduction in the total percentage of GC cells, particularly in the light zone (LZ).

      The analysis of the steady-state B cell compartment should also be improved. This includes a more detailed characterization of MZ and B1 populations, given the role of lipid metabolism and lipid peroxidation in these subtypes.

      Suggestions for Improvement:

      B Cell compartment characterization: A deeper characterization of the B cell compartment in non-immunized mice is needed, including analysis of Marginal Zone (MZ) maturation and a more detailed examination of the B1 compartment. This is especially important given the role of specific lipid metabolism in these cell types. The phenotyping of the B cell compartment should also include an analysis of immunoglobulin levels on the membrane, considering the impact of lipids on membrane composition.

      Although the manuscript is focused on post-ontogenic B cell regulation in Ab responses, we believe we will be able to polish a revised manuscript through addition of results of analyses suggested by this point in the review: measurement of surface IgM on and phenotyping of various B cell subsets, including MZB and B1 B cells, to extend the data in Supplemental Fig 1H and I. Depending on the level of support, new immunization experiments to score Tfh and analyze a few of their functional molecules as part of a B cell paper may be feasible.  

      - GC Response Analysis Upon Immunization: The GC response characterization should include additional data on the T cell compartment, specifically the presence and function of Tfh cells. In Fig. 1H, the distribution of the LZ appears strikingly different. However, the authors have not addressed this in the text. A more thorough characterization of centroblasts and centrocytes using CXCR4 and CD86 markers is needed.

      The gating strategy used to characterize GC cells (GL7+CD95+ in IgD− cells) is suboptimal. A more robust analysis of GC cells should be performed in total B220+CD138− cells.

      We first want to apologize the mislabeling of LZ and DZ in Fig 1H. The greenish-yellow colored region (GL7<sup>+</sup> CD35<sup>+</sup>) indicate the DZ and the cyan-colored region (GL7<sup>+</sup> CD35<sup>+</sup>) indicates the LZ.

      As a technical note, we experienced high background noise with GL7 staining uniquely with PexRAP deficient (Dhrs7b<sup>f/f</sup>; Rosa26-CreER<sup>T2</sup>) mice (i.e., not WT control mice). The high background noise of GL7 staining was not observed in B cell specific KO of PexRAP (Dhrs7b<sup>f/f</sup>; huCD20-CreER<sup>T2</sup>). Two formal possibilities to account for this staining issue would be if either the expression of the GL7 epitope were repressed by PexRAP or the proper positioning of GL7<sup>+</sup> cells in germinal center region were defective in PexRAP-deficient mice (e.g., due to an effect on positioning cues from cell types other than B cells). In a revised manuscript, we will fix the labeling error and further discuss the GL7 issue, while taking care not to be thought to conclude that there is a positioning problem or derepression of GL7 (an activation antigen on T cells as well as B cells).

      While the gating strategy for an overall population of GC B cells is fairly standard even in the current literature, the question about using CD138 staining to exclude early plasmablasts (i.e., analyze B220<sup>+</sup> CD138<sup>neg</sup> vs B220<sup>+</sup> CD138<sup>+</sup>) is interesting. In addition, some papers like to use GL7<sup>+</sup> CD38<sup>neg</sup> for GC B cells instead of GL7<sup>+</sup> Fas (CD95)<sup>+</sup>, and we thank the reviewer for suggesting the analysis of centroblasts and centrocytes. For the revision, we will try to secure resources to revisit the immunizations and analyze them for these other facets of GC B cells (including CXCR4/CD86) and for their GL7<sup>+</sup> CD38<sup>neg</sup>. B220<sup>+</sup> CD138<sup>-</sup> and B220<sup>+</sup> CD138<sup>+</sup> cell populations. 

      We agree that comparison of the Rosa26-CreERT2 results to those with B cell-specific loss-of-function raise a tantalizing possibility that Tfh cells also are influenced by PexRAP. Although the manuscript is focused on post-ontogenic B cell regulation in Ab responses, we hope to add a new immunization experiments that scores Tfh and analyzes a few of their functional molecules could be added to this B cell paper, depending on the ability to wheedle enough support / fiscal resources.

      - The authors claim that Dhrs7b supports the homeostatic maintenance of quiescent B cells in vivo and promotes effective proliferation. This conclusion is primarily based on experiments where CTV-labeled PexRAP-deficient B cells were adoptively transferred into μMT mice (Fig. 2D-F). However, we recommend reviewing the flow plots of CTV in Fig. 2E, as they appear out of scale. More importantly, the low recovery of PexRAP-deficient B cells post-adoptive transfer weakens the robustness of the results and is insufficient to conclusively support the role of PexRAP in B cell proliferation in vivo.

      In the revision, we will edit the text and try to adjust the digitized cytometry data to allow more dynamic range to the right side of the upper panels in Fig. 2E, and otherwise to improve the presentation of the in vivo CTV result. However, we feel impelled to push back respectfully on some of the concern raised here. First, it seems to gloss over the presentation of multiple facets of evidence. The conclusion about maintenance derives primarily from Fig. 2C, which shows a rapid, statistically significant decrease in B cell numbers (extending the finding of Fig. 1D, a more substantial decrease after a bit longer a period). As noted in the text, the rate of de novo B cell production does not suffice to explain the magnitude of the decrease.

      In terms of proliferation, we will improve presentation of the Methods but the bottom line is that the recovery efficiency is not bad (comparing to prior published work) inasmuch as transferred B cells do not uniformly home to spleen. In a setting where BAFF is in ample supply in vivo, we transferred equal numbers of cells that were equally labeled with CTV and counted B cells.  The CTV result might be affected by lower recovered B cell with PexRAP deficiency, generally, the frequencies of CTV<sup>low</sup> divided population are not changed very much. However, it is precisely because of the pitfalls of in vivo analyses that we included complementary data with survival and proliferation in vitro. The proliferation was attenuated in PexRAP-deficient B cells in vitro; this evidence supports the conclusion that proliferation of PexRAP knockout B cells is reduced. It is likely that PexRAP deficient B cells also have defect in viability in vivo as we observed the reduced B cell number in PexRAP-deficient mice. As the reviewer noticed, the presence of a defect in cycling does, in the transfer experiments, limit the ability to interpret a lower yield of B cell population after adoptive transfer into µMT recipient mice as evidence pertaining to death rates. We will edit the text of the revision with these points in mind.

      - In vitro stimulation experiments: These experiments need improvement. The authors have used anti-CD40 and BAFF for B cell stimulation; however, it would be beneficial to also include anti-IgM in the stimulation cocktail. In Fig. 2G, CTV plots do not show clear defects in proliferation, yet the authors quantify the percentage of cells with more than three divisions. These plots should clearly display the gating strategy. Additionally, details about histogram normalization and potential defects in cell numbers are missing. A more in-depth analysis of apoptosis is also required to determine whether the observed defects are due to impaired proliferation or reduced survival.

      As suggested by reviewer, testing additional forms of B cell activation can help explore the generality (or lack thereof) of findings. We plan to test anti-IgM stimulation together with anti-CD40 + BAFF as well as anti-IgM + TLR7/8, and add the data to a revised and final manuscript.

      With regards to Fig. 2G (and 2H), in the revised manuscript we will refine the presentation (add a demonstration of the gating, and explicate histogram normalization of FlowJo).

      It is an interesting issue in bioscience, but in our presentation 'representative data' really are pretty representative, so a senior author is reminded of a comment Tak Mak made about a reduction (of proliferation, if memory serves) to 0.7 x control. [His point in a comment to referees at a symposium related that to a salary reduction by 30% :) A mathematical alternative is to point out that across four rounds of division for WT cells, a reduction to 0.7x efficiency at each cycle means about 1/4 as many progeny.] 

      We will try to edit the revision (Methods, Legends, Results, Discussion] to address better the points of the last two sentences of the comment, and improve the details that could assist in replication or comparisons (e.g., if someone develops a PexRAP inhibitor as potential therapeutic).

      For the present, please note that the cell numbers at the end of the cultures are currently shown in Fig 2, panel I. Analogous culture results are shown in Fig 8, panels I, J, albeit with harvesting at day 5 instead of day 4. So, a difference of ≥ 3x needs to be explained. As noted above, a division efficiency reduced to 0.7x normal might account for such a decrease, but in practice the data of Fig. 2I show that the number of PexRAP-deficient B cells at day 4 is similar to the number plated before activation, and yet there has been a reasonable amount of divisions. So cell numbers in the culture of  mutant B cells are constant because cycling is active but decreased and insufficient to allow increased numbers ("proliferation" in the true sense) as programmed death is increased. In line with this evidence, Fig 8G-H document higher death rates [i.e., frequencies of cleaved caspase3<sup>+</sup> cell and Annexin V<sup>+</sup> cells] of PexRAP-deficient B cells compared to controls. Thus, the in vitro data lead to the conclusion that both decreased division rates and increased death operate after this form of stimulation.

      An inference is that this is the case in vivo as well - note that recoveries differed by ~3x (Fig. 2D), and the decrease in divisions (presentation of which will be improved) was meaningful but of lesser magnitude (Fig. 2E, F).  

      Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Cho et al. investigate the role of ether lipid biosynthesis in B cell biology, particularly focusing on GC B cell, by inducible deletion of PexRAP, an enzyme responsible for the synthesis of ether lipids.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the data are well-presented, the paper is well-written and provides valuable mechanistic insights into the importance of PexRAP enzyme in GC B cell proliferation.

      We appreciate this positive response and agree with the overview and summary of the paper's approaches and strengths.

      Weaknesses:

      More detailed mechanisms of the impaired GC B cell proliferation by PexRAP deficiency remain to be further investigated. In the minor part, there are issues with the interpretation of the data which might cause confusion for the readers.

      Issues about contributions of cell cycling and divisions on the one hand, and susceptibility to death on the other, were discussed above, amplifying on the current manuscript text. The aggregate data support a model in which both processes are impacted for mature B cells in general, and mechanistically the evidence and work focus on the increased ROS and modes of death. Although the data in Fig. 7 do provide evidence that GC B cells themselves are affected, we agree that resource limitations had militated against developing further evidence about cycling specifically for GC B cells. We will hope to be able to obtain sufficient data from some specific analysis of proliferation in vivo (e.g., Ki67 or BrdU) as well as ROS and death ex vivo when harvesting new samples from mice immunized to analyze GC B cells for CXCR4/CD86, CD38, CD138 as indicated by Reviewer 1.  As suggested by Reviewer 2, we will further discuss the possible mechanism(s) by which proliferation of PexRAP-deficient B cells is impaired. We also will edit the text of a revision where to enhance clarity of data interpretation - at a minimum, to be very clear that caution is warranted in assuming that GC B cells will exhibit the same mechanisms as cultures in vitro-stimulated B cells.

    1. The Investigative Function Presentation,” “What is Civic Engagement?,” “Using Technology for Civic Engagement in Criminal Justice,” “Course Skills & Motivation,” and “Rights Talk”

      The case studies we will be focusing on.

    1. I understood the problems plaguing poor communities of color, including issues associated with crime and rising incarceration rates, to be a function of poverty and lack of access to quality education- the continuing legacy of slavery and Jim Crow.

      During the event of Jim Crow Laws in 1877 to 1950s, the problems have occurred that crime was functional to be the high associations for a lack of access to quality within increased incarceration levels.

    2. In the era of colorblindness, it is no longer socially permissible to use race, explicitly, as a justification for discrimination, exclusion, and social contempt.

      I rely on its exhibition in the era of colorblindness, it was justified for discrimination as in result for insolence must be punished. We shouldn't harm each other.

    3. Jarvious Cotton's great-grandfather could not vote as a slave. His great-grandfather was beaten to death by the Ku Klux Klan for attempting to vote. His grandfather was prevented from voting by Klan intimidation. His father was barred from voting by poll taxes and literacy tests.

      Cotton's fate of his grandfather's death at the hands of Klan was a tragedy, but he believes his father was trying to prevent form voting by poll taxes and literal expectations.

    1. Europeans called the Americas “The New World.” But for the millions of Native Americans they encountered, it was anything but. Human beings have lived here for over ten millennia.

      The Europeans claimed this land was "new". That was not the case, Native Americans had been there for years. It was nothing "new" to them.

    1. No hay mayor oportunidad, responsabilidad u obligación que pueda tocarle a un ser humano que convertirse en médico. En la atención del sufrimiento, el médico necesita habilidades técnicas, conocimientos científicos y comprensión de los aspectos humanos. Del médico se espera tacto, empatía y comprensión, ya que el paciente es algo más que un cúmulo de síntomas, signos, trastornos funcionales, daño de órganos y emociones alteradas. El enfermo es un ser humano que tiene temores, alberga esperanzas y por ello busca alivio, ayuda y consuelo.

      Importante

    1. In the early ages of the world, according to the scripture chronology there were no kings; theconsequence of which was, there were no wars;

      Paine uses historical and biblical examples to argue that monarchy causes conflict, contrasting peaceful early societies with violent monarchies.

    2. Every spot of the old world is overrun with oppression. Freedom hath been huntedround the globe. Asia, and Africa, have long expelled her. — Europe regards her like astranger, and England hath given her warning to depart. O! receive the fugitive, and preparein time an asylum for mankind

      Paine shows the revolution has global significance and urges America to protect liberty, emphasizing the importance of action.

    3. O ye that love mankind! Ye that dare oppose, not only the tyranny, but the tyrant, standforth!

      How does Paine's call to action compare to petitions, letters, or other revolutionary writings we've read in the course?

    4. Society in every state is a blessing, but Government, even in its best state, is but a necessaryevil

      Why does Paine separate society and government? How does this connect to Enlightenment ideas about natural rights or the social contract?

    5. The cause of America is in a great measure the cause of all mankind.

      Paine believes America's fight for independence is part of a larger global struggle for freedom, not just a local issue. This helps convince readers that their actions matter worldwide.

    6. As a long and violent abuse of power, is generally the Means of calling the right of it inquestion (and in Matters too which might never have been thought of, had not the Sufferersbeen aggravated into the inquiry) and as the King of England hath undertaken in his OWNRIGHT, to support the Parliament in what he calls THEIRS, and as the good people of thiscountry are grievously oppressed by the combination, they have an undoubted privilege toinquire into the pretensions of both, and equally to reject the usurpation of either

      Paine argues that when leaders abuse power, people have the right to question and reject them. This shows why colonists could challenge British rules.

    7. But the tumult soon subsides. Time makes more converts than reason

      Even if people resist new ideas at first, over time most will agree. Paine predicts that support for independence will grow naturally.

    8. Society in every state is a blessing, but Government, even in its best state, is but a necessaryevil

      He means people working together (society) is good, but government is something we only need because people are not perfect.

    1. Unlike the group low in autismcharacteristics, who showed normal mu suppression when viewing videos ofactions and pictures of manipulable

      for those with high autism traits, this "mental rehearsal" system doesn't work as effectively, so their brain doesn't have the same response when just watching.

    2. “flavor” of traditionalcognitive science to reveal some of its more implicit commitments

      The author uses the term "flavor" to refer to the core, often unstated, assumptions or a general approach that characterizes traditional cognitive science. This "flavor" includes key implicit commitments that define the framework within which research is conducted.

    1. Art. 158

      Pertence ao Município, aos Estados e ao Distrito Federal a titularidade das receitas arrecadadas a título de imposto de renda retido na fonte incidente sobre valores pagos por eles, suas autarquias e fundações a pessoas físicas ou jurídicas contratadas para a prestação de bens ou serviços, conforme disposto nos arts. 158, I, e 157, I, da Constituição Federal. Nesse sentido:


      • RE 1293453 - Tema 1.130
      • Órgão julgador: Tribunal Pleno
      • Relator(a): Min. ALEXANDRE DE MORAES
      • Julgamento: 11/10/2021
      • Publicação: 22/10/2021

      RECURSO EXTRAORDINÁRIO. REPERCUSSÃO GERAL. INCIDENTE DE RESOLUÇÃO DE DEMANDAS REPETITIVAS (IRDR). DIREITO TRIBUTÁRIO. DIREITO FINANCEIRO. REPARTIÇÃO DE RECEITAS ENTRE OS ENTES DA FEDERAÇÃO. TITULARIDADE DO IMPOSTO DE RENDA INCIDENTE NA FONTE SOBRE RENDIMENTOS PAGOS, A QUALQUER TÍTULO, PELOS MUNICÍPIOS, A PESSOAS FÍSICAS OU JURÍDICAS CONTRATADAS PARA PRESTAÇÃO DE BENS OU SERVIÇOS. ART. 158, INCISO I, DA CONSTITUIÇÃO FEDERAL. RECURSO EXTRAORDINÁRIO DESPROVIDO. TESE FIXADA.

      • 1. A Constituição Federal de 1988 rompeu com o paradigma anterior - no qual verificávamos a tendência de concentração do poder econômico no ente central (União)-, implementando a descentralização de competências e receitas aos entes subnacionais, a fim de garantir-lhes a autonomia necessária para cumprir suas atribuições.

      • 2. A análise dos dispositivos constitucionais que versam sobre a repartição de receitas entre os Entes Federados, considerando o contexto histórico em que elaborados, deve ter em vista a tendência de descentralização dos recursos e os valores do federalismo de cooperação, com vistas ao fortalecimento e autonomia dos entes subnacionais.

      • 3. A Constituição Federal, ao dispor no art. 158, I, que pertencem aos Municípios “ o produto da arrecadação do imposto da União sobre renda e proventos de qualquer natureza, incidente na fonte, sobre rendimentos pagos, a qualquer título, por eles, suas autarquias e pelas fundações que instituírem e mantiverem.”, optou por não restringir expressamente o termo ‘rendimentos pagos’, por sua vez, a expressão ‘a qualquer título’ demonstra nitidamente a intenção de ampliar as hipóteses de abrangência do referido termo. Desse modo, o conceito de rendimentos constante do referido dispositivo constitucional não deve ser interpretado de forma restritiva.

      • 4. A previsão constitucional de repartição das receitas tributárias não altera a distribuição de competências, pois não influi na privatividade do ente federativo em instituir e cobrar seus próprios impostos, influindo, tão somente, na distribuição da receita arrecadada, inexistindo, na presente hipótese, qualquer ofensa ao art. 153, III, da Constituição Federal.

      • 5. O direito subjetivo do ente federativo beneficiado com a participação no produto da arrecadação do Imposto de Renda Retido na Fonte - IRRF, nos termos dos arts. 157, I, e 158, I, da Constituição Federal, somente existirá a partir do momento em que o ente federativo competente criar o tributo e ocorrer seu fato imponível. No entanto, uma vez devidamente instituído o tributo, não pode a União - que possui a competência legislativa - inibir ou restringir o acesso dos entes constitucionalmente agraciados com a repartição de receitas aos valores que lhes correspondem.

      • 6. O acórdão recorrido, ao fixar a tese no sentido de que “O artigo 158, I, da Constituição Federal de 1988 define a titularidade municipal das receitas arrecadadas a título de imposto de renda retido na fonte, incidente sobre valores pagos pelos Municípios, a pessoas físicas ou jurídicas contratadas para a prestação de bens ou serviços”, atentou-se à literalidade e à finalidade (descentralização de receitas) do disposto no art. 158, I, da Lei Maior.

      • 7. Ainda que em dado momento alguns entes federados, incluindo a União, tenham adotado entendimento restritivo relativamente ao disposto no art. 158, I, da Constituição Federal, tal entendimento vai de encontro à literalidade do referido dispositivo constitucional, devendo ser extirpado do ordenamento jurídico pátrio.

      • 8. A delimitação imposta pelo art. 64 da Lei 9.430/1996 - que permite a retenção do imposto de renda somente pela Administração federal - é claramente inconstitucional, na medida em que cria uma verdadeira discriminação injustificada entre os entes federativos, com nítida vantagem para a União Federal e exclusão dos entes subnacionais.

      • 9. Recurso Extraordinário a que se nega provimento. Fixação da seguinte tese para o TEMA 1130: “Pertence ao Município, aos Estados e ao Distrito Federal a titularidade das receitas arrecadadas a título de imposto de renda retido na fonte incidente sobre valores pagos por eles, suas autarquias e fundações a pessoas físicas ou jurídicas contratadas para a prestação de bens ou serviços, conforme disposto nos arts. 158, I, e 157, I, da Constituição Federal.”

      Tema 1130 - Titularidade das receitas arrecadadas a título de imposto de renda retido na fonte incidente sobre valores pagos pelos Municípios, suas autarquias e fundações a pessoas físicas ou jurídicas contratadas para a prestação de bens ou serviços.

      Tese - Pertence ao Município, aos Estados e ao Distrito Federal a titularidade das receitas arrecadadas a título de imposto de renda retido na fonte incidente sobre valores pagos por eles, suas autarquias e fundações a pessoas físicas ou jurídicas contratadas para a prestação de bens ou serviços, conforme disposto nos arts. 158, I, e 157, I, da Constituição Federal.

      Outras ocorrências Decisão (1)

    1. functionalisme.

      De theorie veronderstelt dat alle aspecten van de mentale toestand van een mens uitsluitend gevormd worden door de functie die zij hebben in de maatschappij

    1. eLife Assessment

      This paper presents a computational method to infer from data a key feature of affinity maturation: the relationship between the affinity of B-cell receptors and their fitness. The approach, which is based on a simple population dynamics model but inferred using AI-powered Simulation-Based Inference, is novel and valuable. It exploits recently published data on replay experiments of affinity maturation. While the method is well-argued and the validation solid, the potential impact of the study is hindered by its complex presentation, which makes it hard to assess its claims reliably.

    2. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper aims to characterize the relationship between affinity and fitness in the process of affinity maturation. To this end, the authors develop a model of germinal center reaction and a tailored statistical approach, building on recent advances in simulation-based inference. The potential impact of this work is hindered by the poor organization of the manuscript. In crucial sections, the writing style and notations are unclear and difficult to follow.

      Strengths:

      The model provides a framework for linking affinity measurements and sequence evolution and does so while accounting for the stochasticity inherent to the germinal center reaction. The model's sophistication comes at the cost of numerous parameters and leads to intractable likelihood, which are the primary challenges addressed by the authors. The approach to inference is innovative and relies on training a neural network on extensive simulations of trajectories from the model.

      Weaknesses:

      The text is challenging to follow. The descriptions of the model and the inference procedure are fragmented and repetitive. In the introduction and the methods section, the same information is often provided multiple times, at different levels of detail. This organization sometimes requires the reader to move back and forth between subsections (there are multiple non-specific references to "above" and "below" in the text).

      The choice of some parameter values in simulations appears arbitrary and would benefit from more extensive justification. It remains unclear how the "significant uncertainty" associated with these parameters affects the results of inference. In addition, the performance of the inference scheme on simulated data is difficult to evaluate, as the reported distributions of loss function values are not very informative.

      Finally, the discussion of the similarities and differences with an alternative approach to this inference problem, presented in Dewitt et al. (2025), is incomplete.

    3. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper presents a new approach for explicitly transforming B-cell receptor affinity into evolutionary fitness in the germinal center. It demonstrates the feasibility of using likelihood-free inference to study this problem and demonstrates how effective birth rates appear to vary with affinity in real-world data.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors leverage the unique data they have generated for a separate project to provide novel insights into a fundamental question.

      (2) The paper is clearly written, with accessible methods and a straightforward discussion of the limits of this model.

      (3) Code and data are publicly available and well-documented.

      Weaknesses (minor):

      (1) Lines 444-446: I think that "affinity ceiling" and "fitness ceiling" should be considered independent concepts. The former, as the authors ably explain, is a physical limitation. This wouldn't necessarily correspond to a fitness ceiling, though, as Figure 7 shows. Conversely, the model developed here would allow for a fitness ceiling even if the physical limit doesn't exist.

      (2) Lines 566-569: I would like to see this caveat fleshed out more and perhaps mentioned earlier in the paper. While relative affinity is far more important, it is not at all clear to me that absolute affinity can be totally ignored in modeling GC behavior.

      (3) One other limitation that is worth mentioning, though beyond the scope of the current work to fully address: the evolution of the repertoire is also strongly shaped by competition from circulating antibodies. (Eg: http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3600904/, http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1931312820303978). This is irrelevant for the replay experiment modeled here, but still an important factor in general repertoires.

    1. eLife Assessment

      This valuable study proposes a theoretical model of clathrin coat formation based on membrane elasticity that seeks to determine whether this process occurs by increasing the area of a protein-coated patch with constant curvature, or by increasing the curvature of a protein-coated patch that forms in an initially flat conformation (so called constant curvature or constant area models). Identifying energetically favorable pathways and comparing the obtained shapes with experiments provides solid support to the constant-area pathway. This work will be of interest for biologists and biophysicists interested in membrane remodelling and endocytosis. It provides an innovative approach to tackle the question of constant curvature vs. constant area coat protein formation, although some of the model's assumption are only partially supported by experimental evidence.

    2. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors develop a set of biophysical models to investigate whether a constant area hypothesis or a constant curvature hypothesis explains the mechanics of membrane vesiculation during clathrin-mediated endocytosis.

      Strengths:

      The models that the authors choose are fairly well-described in the field and the manuscript is well-written.

      Weaknesses:

      One thing that is unclear is what is new with this work. If the main finding is that the differences are in the early stages of endocytosis, then one wonders if that should be tested experimentally. Also, the role of clathrin assembly and adhesion are treated as mechanical equilibrium but perhaps the process should not be described as equilibria but rather a time-dependent process. Ultimately, there are so many models that address this question that without direct experimental comparison, it's hard to place value on the model prediction.

      While an attempt is made to do so with prior published EM images, there is excessive uncertainty in both the data itself as is usually the case but also in the methods that are used to symmetrize the data. This reviewer wonders about any goodness of fit when such uncertainty is taken into account.

      Comments on revisions:

      I appreciate the authors edits, but I found that the major concerns I had still hold. Therefore, I did not alter my review.

    3. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors employ theoretical analysis of an elastic membrane model to explore membrane vesiculation pathways in clathrin-mediated endocytosis. A complete understanding of clathrin-mediated endocytosis requires detailed insight into the process of membrane remodeling, as the underlying mechanisms of membrane shape transformation remain controversial, particularly regarding membrane curvature generation. The authors compare constant area and constant membrane curvature as key scenarios by which clathrins induce membrane wrapping around the cargo to accomplish endocytosis. First, they characterize the geometrical aspects of the two scenarios and highlight their differences by imposing coating area and membrane spontaneous curvature. They then examine the energetics of the process to understand the driving mechanisms behind membrane shape transformations in each model. In the latter part, they introduce two energy terms: clathrin assembly or binding energy, and curvature generation energy, with two distinct approaches for the latter. Finally, they identify the energetically favorable pathway in the combined scenario and compare their results with experiments, showing that the constant-area pathway better fits the experimental data.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript is well-written, well-organized, and presents the details of the theoretical analysis with sufficient clarity.<br /> The calculations are valid, and the elastic membrane model is an appropriate choice for addressing the differences between the constant curvature and constant area models.<br /> The authors' approach of distinguishing two distinct free energy terms-clathrin assembly and curvature generation-and then combining them to identify the favorable pathway is both innovative and effective in addressing the problem.<br /> Notably, their identification of the energetically favorable pathways, and how these pathways either lead to full endocytosis or fail to proceed due to insufficient energetic drives, is particularly insightful.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have carefully addressed all my comments, and the revised manuscript is now clear, rigorous, and satisfactory.

    4. Author response:

      The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews

      Reviewer #1:

      Summary

      The authors develop a set of biophysical models to investigate whether a constant area hypothesis or a constant curvature hypothesis explains the mechanics of membrane vesiculation during clathrin-mediated endocytosis.

      Strengths

      The models that the authors choose are fairly well-described in the field and the manuscript is wellwritten.

      Thank you for your positive comments on our work.

      Weaknesses

      One thing that is unclear is what is new with this work. If the main finding is that the differences are in the early stages of endocytosis, then one wonders if that should be tested experimentally. Also, the role of clathrin assembly and adhesion are treated as mechanical equilibrium but perhaps the process should not be described as equilibria but rather a time-dependent process. Ultimately, there are so many models that address this question that without direct experimental comparison, it's hard to place value on the model prediction.

      Thank you for your insightful questions. We fully agree that distinguishing between the two models should ultimately be guided by experimental tests. This is precisely the motivation for including Fig. 5 in our manuscript, where we compare our theoretical predictions with experimental data. In the middle panel of Fig. 5, we observe that the predicted tip radius as a function of 𝜓<sub>𝑚𝑎𝑥</sub> from the constant curvature model (magenta curve) deviates significantly from both the experimental data points and the rolling median, highlighting the inconsistency of this model with the data.

      Regarding our treatment of clathrin assembly and membrane adhesion as mechanical equilibrium processes, our reasoning is based on a timescale separation argument. Clathrin assembly typically occurs over approximately 1 minute. In contrast, the characteristic relaxation time for a lipid membrane to reach mechanical equilibrium is given by , where 𝜇∼5 × 10<sup>-9</sup> 𝑁𝑠𝑚<sup>-1</sup> is the membrane viscosity, 𝑅<sub>0</sub> =50𝑛𝑚 is the vesicle size, 𝜅=20 𝑘<sub>𝐵</sub>𝑇 is the bending rigidity. This yields a relaxation time of 𝜏≈1.5 × 10<sup>−4</sup>𝑠, which is several orders of magnitude shorter than the timescale of clathrin assembly. Therefore, it is reasonable to treat the membrane shape as being in mechanical equilibrium throughout the assembly process.

      We believe the value of our model lies in the following key novelties:

      (1) Model novelty: We introduce an energy term associated with curvature generation, a contribution that is typically neglected in previous models.

      (2) Methodological novelty: We perform a quantitative comparison between theoretical predictions and experimental data, whereas most earlier studies rely on qualitative comparisons.

      (3) Results novelty: Our quantitative analysis enables us to unambiguously exclude the constant curvature hypothesis based on time-independent electron microscopy data.

      In the revised manuscript (line 141), we have added a statement about why we treat the clathrin assembly as in mechanical equilibrium.

      While an attempt is made to do so with prior published EM images, there is excessive uncertainty in both the data itself as is usually the case but also in the methods that are used to symmetrize the data. This reviewer wonders about any goodness of fit when such uncertainty is taken into account.

      Author response: We thank the reviewer for raising this important point. We agree that there is uncertainty in the experimental data. Our decision to symmetrize the data is based on the following considerations:

      (1) The experimental data provide a one-dimensional membrane profile corresponding to a cross-sectional view. To reconstruct the full two-dimensional membrane surface, we must assume rotational symmetry.

      (2)In addition to symmetrization, we also average membrane profiles within a certain range of 𝜓<sub>𝑚𝑎𝑥</sub> values (see Fig. 5d). This averaging helps reduce the uncertainty (due to biological and experimental variability) inherent to individual measurements.

      (3)To further address the noise in the experimental data, we compare our theoretical predictions not only with individual data points but also with a rolling median, which provides a smoothed representation of the experimental trends.

      These steps are taken to ensure a more robust and meaningful comparison between theory and experiments.

      In the revised manuscript (line 338), we have explained why we have to symmetrize the data:

      “To facilitate comparison between the axisymmetric membrane shapes predicted by the model and the non-axisymmetric profiles obtained from electron microscopy, we apply a symmetrization procedure to the experimental data, which consist of one-dimensional membrane profiles extracted from cross-sectional views, as detailed in Appendix 3 (see also Appendix 3--Fig. 1).”

      Reviewer #2:

      Summary

      In this manuscript, the authors employ theoretical analysis of an elastic membrane model to explore membrane vesiculation pathways in clathrin-mediated endocytosis. A complete understanding of clathrin-mediated endocytosis requires detailed insight into the process of membrane remodeling, as the underlying mechanisms of membrane shape transformation remain controversial, particularly regarding membrane curvature generation. The authors compare constant area and constant membrane curvature as key scenarios by which clathrins induce membrane wrapping around the cargo to accomplish endocytosis. First, they characterize the geometrical aspects of the two scenarios and highlight their differences by imposing coating area and membrane spontaneous curvature. They then examine the energetics of the process to understand the driving mechanisms behind membrane shape transformations in each model. In the latter part, they introduce two energy terms: clathrin assembly or binding energy, and curvature generation energy, with two distinct approaches for the latter. Finally, they identify the energetically favorable pathway in the combined scenario and compare their results with experiments, showing that the constant-area pathway better fits the experimental data.

      Thank you for your clear and comprehensive summary of our work.

      Strengths

      The manuscript is well-written, well-organized, and presents the details of the theoretical analysis with sufficient clarity. The calculations are valid, and the elastic membrane model is an appropriate choice for addressing the differences between the constant curvature and constant area models.

      The authors' approach of distinguishing two distinct free energy terms-clathrin assembly and curvature generation-and then combining them to identify the favorable pathway is both innovative and effective in addressing the problem.

      Notably, their identification of the energetically favorable pathways, and how these pathways either lead to full endocytosis or fail to proceed due to insufficient energetic drives, is particularly insightful.

      Thank you for your positive remarks regarding the innovative aspects of our work.

      Weaknesses and Recommendations

      Weakness: Membrane remodeling in cellular processes is typically studied in either a constant area or constant tension ensemble. While total membrane area is preserved in the constant area ensemble, membrane area varies in the constant tension ensemble. In this manuscript, the authors use the constant tension ensemble with a fixed membrane tension, σe. However, they also use a constant area scenario, where 'area' refers to the surface area of the clathrin-coated membrane segment. This distinction between the constant membrane area ensemble and the constant area of the coated membrane segment may cause confusion.

      Recommendation: I suggest the authors clarify this by clearly distinguishing between the two concepts by discussing the constant tension ensemble employed in their theoretical analysis.

      Thank you for raising this question.

      In the revised manuscript (line 136), we have added a sentence, emphasizing the implication of the term “constant area model”:

      “We emphasize that the constant area model refers to the assumption that the clathrin-coated area 𝑎<sub>0</sub> remains fixed. Meanwhile, the membrane tension 𝜎<sub>𝑒</sub> at the base is held constant, allowing the total membrane area 𝐴𝐴 to vary in response to deformations induced by the clathrin coat.”

      Weakness: As mentioned earlier, the theoretical analysis is performed in the constant membrane tension ensemble at a fixed membrane tension. The total free energy E_tot of the system consists of membrane bending energy E_b and tensile energy E_t, which depends on membrane tension, σe. Although the authors mention the importance of both E_b and E_t, they do not present their individual contributions to the total energy changes. Comparing these contributions would enable readers to cross-check the results with existing literature, which primarily focuses on the role of membrane bending rigidity and membrane tension.

      Recommendation: While a detailed discussion of how membrane tension affects their results may fall outside the scope of this manuscript, I suggest the authors at least discuss the total membrane area variation and the contribution of tensile energy E_t for the singular value of membrane tension used in their analysis.

      Thank you for the insightful suggestion. In the revised manuscript (line 916), we have added Appendix 6 and a supplementary figure to compare the bending energy 𝐸<sub>𝑏</sub> and the tension energy 𝐸<sub>𝑡</sub>. Our analysis shows that both energy components exhibit an energy barrier between the flat and vesiculated membrane states, with the tension energy contributing more significantly than the bending energy.

      In the revised manuscript (line 151), we have also added one paragraph explaining why we set the dimensionless tension . This choice is motivated by our use of the characteristic length as the length scale, and as the energy scale. In this way, the dimensionless tension energy is written as

      Where is the dimensionless area.

      Weakness: The authors introduce two different models, (1,1) and (1,2), for generating membrane curvature. Model 1 assumes a constant curvature growth, corresponding to linear curvature growth, while Model 2 relates curvature growth to its current value, resembling exponential curvature growth. Although both models make physical sense in general, I am concerned that Model 2 may lead to artificial membrane bending at high curvatures. Normally, for intermediate bending, ψ > 90, the bending process is energetically downhill and thus proceeds rapidly. The bending process is energetically downhill and thus proceeds rapidly. However, Model 2's assumption would accelerate curvature growth even further. This is reflected in the endocytic pathways represented by the green curves in the two rightmost panels of Fig. 4a, where the energy steeply increases at large ψ. I believe a more realistic version of Model 2 would require a saturation mechanism to limit curvature growth at high curvatures.

      Recommendation 1: I suggest the authors discuss this point and highlight the pros and cons of Model 2. Specifically, addressing the potential issue of artificial membrane bending at high curvatures and considering the need for a saturation mechanism to limit excessive curvature growth. A discussion on how Model 2 compares to Model 1 in terms of physical relevance, especially in the context of high curvature scenarios, would provide valuable insights for the reader.

      Thank you for raising the question of excessive curvature growth in our models and the constructive suggestion of introducing a saturation mechanism. In the revised manuscript (line 405), following your recommendation, we have added a subsection “Saturation effect at high membrane curvatures” in the discussion to clarify the excessive curvature issue and a possible way to introduce a saturation mechanism:

      “Note that our model involves two distinct concepts of curvature growth. The first is the growth of imposed curvature — referred to here as intrinsic curvature and denoted by the parameter 𝑐<sub>0</sub> — which is driven by the reorganization of bonds between clathrin molecules within the coat. The second is the growth of the actual membrane curvature, reflected by the increasing value of 𝜓<sub>𝑚𝑎𝑥</sub>.

      The latter process is driven by the former.

      Models (1,1) and (1,2) incorporate energy terms (Equation 6) that promote the increase of intrinsic curvature 𝑐<sub>0</sub>, which in turn drives the membrane to adopt a more curved shape (increasing 𝜓<sub>𝑚𝑎𝑥</sub>). In the absence of these energy contributions, the system faces an energy barrier separating a weakly curved membrane state (low 𝜓<sub>𝑚𝑎𝑥</sub>) from a highly curved state (high 𝜓<sub>𝑚𝑎𝑥</sub>). This barrier can be observed, for example, in the red curves of Figure 3(a–c) and in Appendix 6—Figure 1. As a result, membrane bending cannot proceed spontaneously and requires additional energy input from clathrin assembly.

      The energy terms described in Equation 6 serve to eliminate this energy barrier by lowering the energy difference between the uphill and downhill regions of the energy landscape. However, these same terms also steepen the downhill slope, which may lead to overly aggressive curvature growth.

      To mitigate this effect, one could introduce a saturation-like energy term of the form:

      where 𝑐<sub>𝑠</sub> represents a saturation curvature. Importantly, adding such a term would not alter the conclusions of our study, since the energy landscape already favors high membrane curvature (i.e., it is downward sloping) even without the additional energy terms. “

      Recommendation 2: Referring to the previous point, the green curves in the two rightmost panels of Fig. 4a seem to reflect a comparison between slow and fast bending regimes. The initial slow vesiculation (with small curvature growth) in the left half of the green curves is followed by much more rapid curvature growth beyond a certain threshold. A similar behavior is observed in Model 1, as shown by the green curves in the two rightmost panels of Fig. 4b. I believe this transition between slow and fast bending warrants a brief discussion in the manuscript, as it could provide further insight into the dynamic nature of vesiculation.

      Thank you for your constructive suggestion regarding the transition between slow and fast membrane bending. As you pointed out, in both Fig. 4a (model (1,2)) and Fig. 4b (model (1,1)), the green curves tend to extend vertically at the late stage. This suggests a significant increase in 𝑐<sub>0</sub> on the free energy landscape. However, we remain cautious about directly interpreting this vertical trend as indicative of fast endocytic dynamics, since our model is purely energetic and does not explicitly incorporate kinetic details. Meanwhile, we agree with your observation that the steep decrease in free energy along the green curve could correspond to an acceleration in dynamics. To address this point, we have added a paragraph in the revised manuscript (in Subsection “Cooperativity in the curvature generation process”) discussing this potential transition and its consistency with experimental observations (line 395):

      “Furthermore, although our model is purely energetic and does not explicitly incorporate dynamics, we observe in Figure 3(a) that along the green curve—representing the trajectory predicted by model (1,2)—the total free energy (𝐸<sub>𝑡𝑜𝑡</sub>) exhibits a much sharper decrease at the late stage (near the vesiculation line) compared to the early stage (near the origin). This suggests a transition from slow to fast dynamics during endocytosis. Such a transition is consistent with experimental observations, where significantly fewer number of images with large 𝜓<sub>𝑚𝑎𝑥</sub> are captured compared to those with small 𝜓<sub>𝑚𝑎𝑥</sub> (Mund et al., 2023).”

      The geometrical properties of both the constant-area and constant-curvature scenarios, as well depicted in Fig. 1, are somewhat straightforward. I wonder what additional value is presented in Fig. 2. Specifically, the authors solve differential shape equations to show how Rt and Rcoat vary with the angle ψ, but this behavior seems predictable from the simple schematics in Fig. 1. Using a more complex model for an intuitively understandable process may introduce counter-intuitive results and unnecessary complications, as seen with the constant-curvature model where Rt varies (the tip radius is not constant, as noted in the text) despite being assumed constant. One could easily assume a constant-curvature model and plot Rt versus ψ. I wonder What is the added value of solving shape equations to measure geometrical properties, compared to a simpler schematic approach (without solving shape equations) similar to what they do in App. 5 for the ratio of the Rt at ψ=30 and 150.

      Thank you for raising this important question. While simple and intuitive theoretical models are indeed convenient to use, their validity must be carefully assessed. The approximate model becomes inaccurate when the clathrin shell significantly deviates from its intrinsic shape, namely a spherical cap characterized by intrinsic curvature 𝑐<sub>0</sub>. As shown in the insets of Fig. 2b and 2c (red line and black points), our comparison between the simplified model and the full model demonstrates that the simple model provides a good approximation under the constant-area constraint. However, it performs poorly under the constant-curvature constraint, and the deviation between the full model and the simplified model becomes more pronounced as 𝑐<sub>0</sub> increases.

      In the revised manuscript, we have added a sentence emphasizing the discrepancy between the exact calculation with the idealized picture for the constant curvature model (line 181):

      “For the constant-curvature model, the ratio remains close to 1 only at small values of 𝑐<sub>0</sub>, as expected from the schematic representation of the model in Figure 1. However, as 𝑐<sub>0</sub> increases, the deviation from this idealized picture becomes increasingly pronounced.”

      Recommendation: The clathrin-mediated endocytosis aims at wrapping cellular cargos such as viruses which are typically spherical objects which perfectly match the constant-curvature scenario. In this context, wrapping nanoparticles by vesicles resembles constant-curvature membrane bending in endocytosis. In particular analogous shape transitions and energy barriers have been reported (similar to Fig.3 of the manuscript) using similar theoretical frameworks by varying membrane particle binding energy acting against membrane bending:

      DOI: 10.1021/la063522m

      DOI: 10.1039/C5SM01793A

      I think a short comparison to particle wrapping by vesicles is warranted.

      Thank you for your constructive suggestion to compare our model with particle wrapping. In the revised manuscript (line 475), we have added a subsection “Comparison with particle wrapping” in the discussion:

      “The purpose of the clathrin-mediated endocytosis studied in our work is the recycling of membrane and membrane-protein, and the cellular uptake of small molecules from the environment — molecules that are sufficiently small to bind to the membrane or be encapsulated within a vesicle. In contrast, the uptake of larger particles typically involves membrane wrapping driven by adhesion between the membrane and the particle, a process that has also been studied previously (Góźdź, 2007; Bahrami et al., 2016). In our model, membrane bending is driven by clathrin assembly, which induces curvature. In particle wrapping, by comparison, the driving force is the adhesion between the membrane and a rigid particle. In the absence of adhesion, wrapping increases both bending and tension energies, creating an energy barrier that separates the flat membrane state from the fully wrapped state. This barrier can hinder complete wrapping, resulting in partial or no engulfment of the particle. Only when the adhesion energy is sufficiently strong can the process proceed to full wrapping. In this context, adhesion plays a role analogous to curvature generation in our model, as both serve to overcome the energy barrier. If the particle is spherical, it imposes a constant-curvature pathway during wrapping. However, the role of clathrin molecules in this process remains unclear and will be the subject of future investigation.”

      Minor points:

      Line 20, abstract, "....a continuum spectrum ..." reads better.

      Line 46 "...clathrin results in the formation of pentagons ...." seems Ito be grammatically correct.

      Line 106, proper citation of the relevant literature is warranted here.

      Line 111, the authors compare features (plural) between experiments and calculations. I would write "....compare geometric features calculated by theory with those ....".

      Line 124, "Here, we choose a ..." (with comma after Here).

      Line 134, "The membrane tension \sigma_e and bending rigidity \kappa define a ...."

      Line 295, "....tip radius, and invagination ...." (with comma before and).

      Line 337, "abortive tips, and ..." (with comma before and).

      We thank you for your thorough review of our manuscript and have corrected all the issues raised.

    1. Some writers explicitly identify and summarize a view they are responding to at the outset of their text and then return to it frequently as their text unfolds. Some refer only obliquely to a view that is motivating them, assuming that readers will be able to reconstruct that view on their own.

      In such terms I expected, summary and identifications can respond to our text, and some case, readers can be able to review a different topic on their own statement.

    2. Without such deep, attentive listening, any critique you make will be superficial and decidedly uncritical. It will be a critique that says more about you than about the writer or idea you're supposedly responding to.

      Critique was pronounced that is official, but it is unclear that you will be said to respond to your writer without listening deeply.

    3. Sometimes it is difficult to figure out the views that writers are responding to, not because these writers do not identify those views, but because their language and the concepts they are dealing with are particularly challenging.

      These views can be important, but difficult, however, to those who responds the language, the concepts of the text adheres their consideration.

    4. Another challenge in reading for the conversation is that writers sometimes build their arguments by responding to a lack of discussion.

      With the lack of discussion, readers cannot understand to build arguments that can never read through conversation.

    5. If you read the passage this way, however, you would be mistaken. Draut is not questioning whether a college degree has become the "ticket to middle-class security", but whether most Americans can obtain that ticket, whether college is within the financial reach of most American families.

      In one big mistake to read the passage in the wrong way, it will be denied. The author is questioning about whether most Americans obtain the ticket rather than ticket to middle-class security in a word.

    6. Readers need to be alert for any changes in voice that a writer might make, since instead of using explicit road-mapping phrases like "although many believe", authors may summarize the view that they want to engage with and indicate only subtly that it is not their own.

      According to my opinion, "although many believe" is too clear for any observations for road-mapping phrase.

    7. In other words, imagine an ongoing, multisided conversation in which all participants are trying to persuade others to agree or at least to take their positions seriously.

      I imagine the multisided statement is to persuade the agreement and make an offer for ongoing request that they're up for. It can be a serious claim what I have known.

    8. The results were often striking. The discussions that followed tended to be far livelier and to draw in a greater number of students. We were still asking students to look for the main argument, but we were now asking them to see that argument as a response to some other argument that provoked it, gave it a reason for being, and helped all of us see why we should care about it.

      It is unclear that why did the provocation of this argument responds to any students, but the results are often impacted in undisclosed measures.

    9. For a long time we didn't worry much about these halting discussions, justifying them to ourselves as the predictable result of assigning difficult, challenging readings.

      At the same time, a challenge can be resourceful and important to justify the result to our stratagem.

    10. The discussion that resulted was often halting, as our students struggled to get a handle on the argument, but eventually, after some awkward silences, the class would come up with something we could all agree was an accurate summary of the author's main thesis.

      As I assure the discussion, this thesis can be often essential for a summary, according to a author's central thesis task.

    1. ‘If we can only receive by giving, then we must begin to give’ (Phatthanaphraiwan & Greene, 2025). The ecological and social challenges we collectively, albeit differentially, confront today in the form of climate change, biodiversity decline and social injustice were created over hundreds of years of appropriation, structural violence on Indigenous, Afro-descendant and other frontline communities globally (Correia, 2024). To guide sustainability management in more ethical and equitable ways, we need to address these relations by recognising the existent inherited prejudice, power asymmetry and hierarchical status. Hence, it is necessary to imagine that rebuilding healthy relations will also take time.

      colonial past implications for reciprocity practice

    2. While the role of IP and LC is increasingly recognised in academic and international policy arenas, a lack of recognition by national governments and some academic fora persists (McElwee et al., 2020; Tormos-Aponte, 2021). Lack of awareness is fourfold: epistemological (different knowledge production and validation methods), ontological (different assumptions of reality), ethical (different moral responsibilities between human and non-human beings) and political (different positions of power to enforce perspectives in collaborative practices, Ludwig & El-Hani, 2020).

      the political problem. How to go beyond academic reciprocity and into social reciprocity.

    3. This relationship between the human and the non-human has been conceptualised as ‘kincentric ecology’ (Bird-David, 1999; Salmón, 2000). From this perspective, plants, animals and fungi are not seen as food or material sources, but rather as vital participants in a relational web that connects humans and animals to spirits, ancestors and other beings. For example, in Baka knowledge systems, individuals of each type of being (‘species’) only exist through their interactions with many other beings and their shared environment, which they all constantly change (Hoyte & Mangombe, 2024).

      Similar to the concept of agential realism!

    4. In many cultures, reciprocity is understood as an interpersonal and communal responsibility to ensure the welfare of the community and the social-ecological system as a whole, where ancestors and those yet to be born are equally considered (Fernández-Llamazares & Virtanen, 2020).

      key term here: "ancestors". We need to think of reciprocity in a way that account for the years of exploitation of our ancestors.

    1. parasitoids attacking spiders offers an ideal system for identifying the origin of such induced behavior, because the evoked behavior is simple

      Would hesitate to call this change simple

    1. Brygos was an ancient Greek potter, active in Athens between 490 and 470 BC. He is known as a producer of excellent drinking cups. About 200 of his pieces are known. The workshop of Brygos employed a red-figure vase painter who is conventionally called the Brygos Painter. The Brygos Painter is one of the most famous vase painters of his time. His work is characterised by its high quality and realistic depictions. The workshop of Brygos also employed the Briseis Painter, among others.

      Cite more, This bibliography is not substantial. once again look at the novet catalogue

    2. Dionysos and satyrs on a vase made by Brygos and painted by the Brygos Painter, ca. 480 BC (Cabinet des Médailles, Paris)

      Perhaps comment on what this is, analyze it maybe

    3. Brygos

      a lot to talk about, maybe do some more research on "Brygos Painter". This is a very short article, try finding more information on the Novet catalogue

    1. 5.3.

      2_mypy.mdを3_mypy.mdにリネームすれば5.2.になります。このPRでは2_mypy.mdは触らないほうがいいと思うので、このままにしておきます。

    1. Configure AG-Grid Locale (Automatic)Set the AG-Grid locale in your Task Management configuration to match your application language (e.g., “en-US”, “ro-RO”, “de-DE”). AG-Grid will automatically translate all 300+ grid component keys including filters, menus, pagination, and data types

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    4. gelijkheidsbeginsel
      • overheid moet gelijke gevallen gelijk behandelen, en ongelijke gevallen ongelijk
      • burgers die in dezelfde situatie verkeren moeten hetzelfde behandeld worden door de overheid
    5. draagkrachtige motiverin
      • goed onderbouwd en overtuigend

      houdt in dat - de argumenten inhoudelijk sterk genoeg zijn - ze logisch voortvloeien uit de feiten - en ze de beslissing echt kunnen dragen