Peer review report
Reviewer: Nidia Bañuelos Institution: University of Wisconsin-Madison email: nbanuelos@wisc.edu
General comments
Questions of how and why grading practices change over time, how students, faculty, and administrators respond to grades, and the external pressures on grading practices (e.g. war, graduate school requirements) are inherently interesting! The authors have clearly done a careful job of tracking these – often minute, and likely, difficult to follow – changes at Dalhousie University. The manuscript is well-written and relatively easy to follow.
My biggest concern, reflected in the more detailed comments below, is that the authors could do a better job of explaining to the reader why these changes are interesting, important, and relevant to historians of higher education more broadly – even those who aren’t at Dalhousie. They do some of this at the very end of the paper and, indeed, this summing up of their findings and explanation of their relevance was my favorite part of the manuscript. I would suggest reorganizing the paper so that these bigger takeaways appear in the introduction and so that the reader is reminded of them at each major section break of the paper. For example, when the authors present a quote from a student who is concerned that grades have little to do with learning outcomes, they might remind us that one of their main arguments is that “decisions about university grading schemes had very little to do with actual pedagogy” (p. 15).
As it is written, the manuscript sometimes reads like a list of facts about grading changes. But, I think a reframing that focuses on the general importance of these changes could make the entire piece more engaging. More on this below…
Section 1 – Serious concerns
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Do you have any serious concerns about the manuscript such as fraud, plagiarism, unethical or unsafe practices? No
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Have authors’ provided the necessary ethics approval (from authors’ institution or an ethics committee)? not applicable
Section 2 – Language quality
- How would you rate the English language quality? High quality
Section 3 – validity and reproducibility
- Does the manuscript contain any objective errors, fundamental flaws, or is key information missing?
While I don’t notice any “objective errors”, I do think the paper has a major flaw (i.e. little explanation of the broader significance of this case study) and could benefit from additional information about the institutional context, the archival material, and external influences on grading trends. (Please see below.)
Section 4 – Suggestions
- Based on your answer in section 3 how could the author improve the study?
I. Most importantly, I would like to see an introduction that explains the authors’ general arguments about grading changes – including the trajectory of these changes at Dalhousie and why this arc contributes to our knowledge of the history of higher education more broadly. Then, the authors might continually remind us of the arc they present at the outset of their paper – especially when they are highlighting a piece of evidence that illustrates their central argument. To me, the quotes from students and faculty responding to grading changes are among the most interesting parts of the paper and placing these in additional context should make them shine even more brightly!
II. I’d like to read a little more about Dalhousie itself – why it is either a remarkable or unremarkable place to study changes in grading policies. Is it representative of most Canadian universities and thus, a good example of how grading changes work in this national context? Is it unlike any other institution of higher education and thus, tells us something important about grades that we could not learn from other case studies? I don’t think this kind of description needs to be particularly long, but it should be a little more involved than the brief sentences the authors currently include (p.3, paragraph 1) and should explain the choice of this case.
III. I’d also like to know more about the archival materials the authors used. The authors mention that they drew from “Senate minutes, university calendars, and student newspapers” (p. 3), but what kinds of conversations about grades did these materials include? At various points, the authors engage in “speculation” (e.g. p.4) about why a particular change occurred. This is just fine and, in fact, it’s good of the authors to remind us that they are not really sure why some of these shifts happened. But, they might go one step further and tell us why they have to speculate. Were explicit discussions of grading changes – including in inter- and intradepartmental letters and memo, reports, and other documents – not available in these archives? Why are these important discussions absent from the historical record?
IV. At various points, the authors make references to the outside world – for example, WWII (p. 5), the Veteran’s Rehabilitation Act (pp. 6-7), and British versus American grading schemas (p. 6). But, these references are brief and seem almost off-handed. I know space is limited, but putting these grading changes in their broader context might help make the case for why this study is interesting and important. Are the changes in the 1940s, for example, related to the ascendance of one national graduate education model over another (e.g. American versus British)? Are there any data on how many Canadian undergraduates enrolled in British versus American graduate programs over time? If so, I would share any information you might have on these broader trends.
Similarly, the authors make brief mention of the internal reaction to grade changes – quoting students or faculty minutes. But, it would be wonderful (space permitting) to have even more information the internal impact of these changes. Did they change faculty instructional practices? Did they seem to have any effect on students’ orientation to their learning? Did standardization reflect an increasing interdependence of departments, or did it contribute to their lessening autonomy? If the archival record doesn’t permit us to know these things, then this might be a limitation the authors note at the end of the manuscript. I noticed that the authors reference a secondary source on Dalhousie student experiences repeatedly (Waite, 1998). Even a little more from this text or another secondary source like it could help the reader better understand the impact of grade changes.
- Do you have any other suggestions, feedback, or comments for the Author?
This is a very nitpicky concern that doesn’t fit well elsewhere, so please take it with a grain of salt. I was surprised at the length of the reference list – it seemed quite short for a historical piece! I wonder, again, if more description of the archival material - including why you looked at these sources, in particular, and what was missing from the record – would help explain this and further convince the reader that you have all your bases covered.
Section 5 – Decision
Requires revisions: The manuscript contains objective errors or fundamental flaws that must be addressed and/or major revisions are suggested.